Tuesday, September 21, 2010

hey at last i have got into the action again and now almost after six months, i am again into ma writing stuff..thanks to my loneliness and of course my PC,alwayz there when i m alone.!! so as my blogs is to share my feelings..this time i m in a mood of becoming a story writer..i don't know how long it will be so it might take two post to the max but let start with it..bear with me friends..!!
"INCEPTION - A NEW BEGINNING"
my story revolves around two people.Mr.Philips brown and his son Zach brown..Zach was brought up by his father as his mother died in a tragic accident,when he was just 2 years.Father busy in his work didn't get enough time to be with his son,but did the best he could have done to make Zach never realized the absence of her mother but still there was always a void between the two on their issues.Zach always wanted to be an actor and was master in his skill but Mr brown didn't want zach to choose acting as a career. Mr. Brown short tempered nature had always been the culprit between their relation, and these problems alwayz made their feeling about how much they loved each other,died in their throats. It was Zach 18th birthday.
the door knocked
"happy birthday son"Mr Brown entered the room

"thanks dad" Zach came out of his bed and hugged his father.

"so son you are 18 now ,how does it feels to be an adult" Mr Brown had a twinkling smile

"stop it dad" zach told smiling too.

"so son here is your present"said Mr Brown by giving zach a key,it was key to his new bike.zach hugged his father like he was hugging a tree which was about to cut.

"ohhh son u will kill me save your emotions as u will be going to new york with your new bike nd girls,ha ha ha"Mr brown pulled off zach and gave him an envelope,it was an admission card of NYU.The joyous aura was suddenly turned into serious environment.

"i have already told you dad,i don't want to do business studies,i want to make my career in acting,i wanna be an actor"zach said streaming out of the room.

"and i have also made it clear to you that i don't want you to get into this line,it will just ruin your life",Mr Brown said angrily.

"Look son i am your father and i know what will be good for you,so try to understand what i m telling you,it's for your sake"Mr Brown said calmly this time.

"It has never been my sake dad,it has always been your wish,you will never understand me,i hope mom would have been here,i miss her very much"zach wore his jacket and was about to go.

"ya just go away those bloody friends of yours are the only family you have got,do hell with this cake"said Mr Brown throwing the cake off.

Reed and tony was zach's so called friends.They were spoiled and ruthless guys.zach was stuck with them as they were the bullies of the town and it provided security to zach.
"Happy birthday champ",said reed nd tony together.

"thanks dude"zach replied.

"wat happened...? let me guess..,it must be your father again,why dont he leaves you on your own"tony said to zach but he didn't replied.

"Jst leave the old man tony,its zach birthday and its time for his present".said Reed taking out an appointment letter from his pocket.

"wats that..?"zach asked reed.

"its your ticket to hollywood dude,this is ma uncle's appointment card,he is an casting director there,i talked to him about you,and he has agreed to cast you in one of his new movies".reed told zach anxiously.

"Are you kidding me dude..!!"zach jumped with joy..

"ahh haan not like this man,its your dream come true,lets celebrate..!!",said reed taking out bottles of beer and champagne.

"you are the beat reed",said zach and they drank all night..zach didnt drank too much but reed and tony was drinking like it was the last day on earth and last remaining bottles of beer.

"its enough tony,stop it reed,u had enough"..said zach to both guyz..

"ok it your birthday,we wiil listen to your each word,stop tony..stop..!!" said reed tumbling.all the guyz went to the car.

Reed was convincing both of them dat he is into his conscious and wanted to drive,and at last he convinced both of them..as they were heading toward their home,Reed was speeding too much and suddenly the car went off his track and got into a public telephone booth lukily no one was injured but their next destination was police station,because police had already arrived on the accident scene.....!!!
that is enough for today post friend i'l hope u like till this part and please provide feedback to me over this..so
( to be continued).....
















8 comments:

  1. m eagerly waiting for d nxt one......u doin sum brilliant wrk dude..... :D

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  2. thanks sam..i have already decided the plot..so il post it 2morrow..!!

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  3. gud goin.. keep it up....best wishes

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  4. my comment wasn't published
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    all i wanna say was

    nice post
    & i'm waiting fr ending

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  5. very well plotted ragz,,,cum on pick up gears n post de ending,,,watin....

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  6. @ vandy and nupur: ya i m almost done with it nd i will post it soon..!!

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  7. grrrr. i m all charged up. goin for the next part now

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